i love the detail! the drapery on the sheet in the back is great. The light and dark values are really nice also. the swastika and the planes are a really nice touch i love how subtle it is! i also like how you did the space outside of the hole in the roof
The detail is great, the perspective is great. The hole in the roof looks great too; it shows that you have an understanding of graphite and the textures and tones you can do with graphite. One thing I would suggest is that the mirror on the ground have a little more contrast so you can see the detail and understand the concept and implications behind this piece a little better. But it is really good, keep going and take even more risks.
So professional!!! The range of values is fantastic and the concepts and idea show sophisticated thinking, risk taking and verve. Maybe add a little contrast to the trees through the roof, in the reflection and on the cloth, just a tiny bit of the darkest value.
I really like this picture. I like how detailed it is and how when I look at it more I see more stuff in it. Great shadowing and use of the light (photography terms haha). It also has great depth. It may look even cooler if you added color to it.
the perspective is really awesome, and i can get the feeling of the war through the drawing. maybe try to photoshop a little bit to brings up the brightness of the white parts
From Tina: Leah- There is so much detail in this small piece! I really like the miniature size you’ve decided for it- its smart too. For an in-progress piece it looks like its going to be amazing when its all done☺ keep up the great work, Leah!
The detail in this peace is amazing! I also like the texture. The perspective is perfect. The only thing I can think of is that you could add a little more definition to the view through the hole in the roof, just to give the objects outside more importance and to make them as intricate as the rest of the room. I also like how the room tells a story. good job!!
um... I. LOVE. IT. The thought you put into this piece is really cool and you spend a lot of time on it. It's very realistic, which I think it's amazing (I will never be able to do that..) I like all the detail, the composition, and also the meaning behind this piece. Ich liebe es!!
i love the detail! the drapery on the sheet in the back is great. The light and dark values are really nice also. the swastika and the planes are a really nice touch i love how subtle it is! i also like how you did the space outside of the hole in the roof
AntwortenLöschenThe detail is great, the perspective is great. The hole in the roof looks great too; it shows that you have an understanding of graphite and the textures and tones you can do with graphite. One thing I would suggest is that the mirror on the ground have a little more contrast so you can see the detail and understand the concept and implications behind this piece a little better. But it is really good, keep going and take even more risks.
AntwortenLöschenSo professional!!!
AntwortenLöschenThe range of values is fantastic and the concepts and idea show sophisticated thinking, risk taking and verve. Maybe add a little contrast to the trees through the roof, in the reflection and on the cloth, just a tiny bit of the darkest value.
I really like this picture. I like how detailed it is and how when I look at it more I see more stuff in it. Great shadowing and use of the light (photography terms haha). It also has great depth. It may look even cooler if you added color to it.
AntwortenLöschenthe perspective is really awesome, and i can get the feeling of the war through the drawing.
AntwortenLöschenmaybe try to photoshop a little bit to brings up the brightness of the white parts
From Tina:
AntwortenLöschenLeah-
There is so much detail in this small piece! I really like the miniature size you’ve decided for it- its smart too. For an in-progress piece it looks like its going to be amazing when its all done☺ keep up the great work, Leah!
The detail in this peace is amazing! I also like the texture. The perspective is perfect. The only thing I can think of is that you could add a little more definition to the view through the hole in the roof, just to give the objects outside more importance and to make them as intricate as the rest of the room. I also like how the room tells a story. good job!!
AntwortenLöschenum... I. LOVE. IT.
AntwortenLöschenThe thought you put into this piece is really cool and you spend a lot of time on it. It's very realistic, which I think it's amazing (I will never be able to do that..) I like all the detail, the composition, and also the meaning behind this piece. Ich liebe es!!